Looking for a critique of my current portfolio for integrated studio arts. I only have 3 pages (out of 24 pages total allowed in portfolio) as of current (actually starting ahead of 99% of students). All 3 pages are of this one project, which was abstract collage. From Right to left it shows the order of my process.

I'm done with the first page (one on far right), but I'm in need of help on what to put for 2nd, 3rd. Also the focus of this portfolio like all are to focus on the work at hand and not the background.

The portfolio should also show evolution of my work in order. I am going to do one more piece for this project because I feel the craft on the red/black far left one is a bit off. I learned a better way to glue things to surfaces heh.